Book of reference: "the greatness of psalms 10th and the greatness of the book 2nd."
Last time i talked to you, there were two things at the heart of the poem: rhyme and flatness, and many friends asked me, "do i know the truth, do i really have to write five words, or do i have a blank mind
It's either written and said, "that's oil poetry. It's not even the basic format."。
It's really not that hard
Mr. Wang li, the master of linguistics, has already given us five full-word underpants: all five words of compliance are four basic sentences that are spelled out like building blocks, and four all-powerful templates。
Today we're going to break this floor of window paper, and we're going to have zero seconds to understand it, and we're going to be able to write it by hand, and we're not going to have to be told it's oil poetry。
Get to the core: $4 million in all five words
Let's put out four “fixed blocks” written in five words. We've all seen them before. We've given them a good nickname today
# 1st block #
(blaze: the first two words, the second one in the middle, the last one, the last one, the end without rhyme, in one or three sentences)
Block two. Ping
Here's the "loneless red line" in the last sentence! This first word has to be flat, it ends, it has to rhyme, it's a soul rhyme)
The 3rd
(the first two are flat, the latter two sound, the end is not rhymed, only one or three sentences)
Number four
(the first two murmurs, the second two flats, the last two flats, must rhyme, the most common rhymes)
It's all four blocks, all the five words that have been spread throughout the ages. They're written by the rules
The rules are so simple:
Four all-power templates. It's a direct set
[stamp 1: foundations without rhymes] (most commonly, first choice)
That's what we've been talking about last time, and 90 percent of the people have learned to write five final words, starting with this template, and we've been doing this for thousands of years。
Collapse order: 1 #2 #3 #4
Corresponds to flat format:
It's flat and flat
It's flat
He's flat
Ping-ping
Our best-known king's landing peak house is a swirl piece of this template:
The day is full
Yellow river into the current
I want to be poor
One more floor
First, the rookies carved this template in their head, found a theme, typed it in plain print, written it absolutely in the rules, and no one will ever say "poetry."。
[stide 2: retrenchment without rhyme]
The template was simpler in that the first two sentences and the second two sentences of the base paragraph were simply turned over, without re-recording new things and in another order。
Collapse order: no. 3 and no. 4 and no. 1 and no. 2
Corresponds to flat format:
He's flat
Ping-ping
It's flat and flat
It's flat
Let's take the example of li tei's "leave a kite."
A kite
In front of the soo-taek room
I want zhou zhou zhou zhou
Time and time chords
You see, it's that simple, in a different order, and it's a completely new legal template, and it's a completely different poetry。
[stamp 3: hot money starts to rhyme]
This template is the most written now. Why? Because its first sentence rhymes, it is easier to read, and it is spoken with the same taste, and it has a particularly popular name。
It is almost identical to the base section, with the first sentence being replaced by the first block, with the fourth rhyme, and the first one is rhymed and the atmosphere is filled directly。
Collapse order: 4 #2 #3 #4
Corresponds to flat format:
Ping-ping
It's flat
He's flat
Ping-ping
The name of this template, let's open our mouths:
Lou quint
The moon is high
♪ in the night ♪
I want to ride with me
The snow is full of bows and knives
This template is used by won-hyun's walking palace and pei-doo's creek room, and the newcomers want to write the final words of long lang, using which the error rate is almost zero。
[team 4: small fund ping starts]
The template is the variant of the transfer, which replaces the third block in the first sentence with the second rhyme, and the first one rhymes with a more moving style, but uses fewer people and suits friends who want to play differently。
Collapse order: 2-4-1-2
Corresponds to flat format:
It's flat
Ping-ping
It's flat and flat
It's flat
Let me give you an example
♪ the flowers are strange ♪
♪ willows willows ♪
For liaoyang
It's not as good as anyone
It doesn't fit the template. It doesn't have to be a poem
And many asked: "how can it not be peaceful for me to use the template of lee baek's nightingale?" isn't it a good poem
Of course, because the five words are in two ways, the four templates that we speak above are a decree, that is, a strict law of peace, and there is one called the ancient, and the great poets, li bai and dufu, have written many ancients。
What's ancient
The ancient rules are particularly liberal: they do not have to be strictly flat, they do not have to be symphony, they do sound, and they do so only for the service of the will。
For example, we've been back since childhood to the big li baek nightings:
The moonlight in front of the bed is suspected to be frost。
Look forward to the moon tomorrow and think back home。
It's an ancient hymn, and it's not exactly the law, but it's a thousand years old, and no one dares say it's an oil poem。
And li tei's "by the new moon" is an ancient hymn:
Open the curtains and see the new moon, even next。
The whispers don't smell, the north wind blows the skirt。
Here's a point for you to make: ancient poetry。
Old age is the beginning of a vision and a poem that is not bound by the rules, but the essence of the difference between the two。
Of course, it is recommended that you first refine the four templates of the doctrine, understand the rules, talk about freedom, write something in order to be bottom-up, rather than fling it out and say that you are “one size fits all”。
Let's conclude with three words:
1. At the heart of the five words is four blocks, four templates, and the new hands will be able to get their hands on the [basics] and [hots] first, and 80% of the scenes will hold
2. Put the template next to it, without a dead end, and just type it, write it in two or three, of course
3. Gertrude is not the threshold, it is a tool for you to write a poem better, not a shackle, not to be afraid of it, let alone to devolve it。
The great poets of the millennia ago, using these same templates, wrote an ancient poem. We are ordinary people, even if we write two words about our lives, write a record of our lives, and put a template on it, we can write a five-word line, and there is no need to be afraid of being poached。
Let me ask you one last thing:
Do you usually write five final words, like a legal template, or do you prefer ancient ones
Let's talk
It's the verse of poetry
