A lot of newcomers who like poetry often have such pains, and they read a lot of articles about poetry knowledge, about peace, battles, rhymes, etc., as well as about the taboos of poetry, such as solitude, tritonity, loss of viscos, and so on, although they can't write them。
From now on, write me the first poem of life. Let's start with a simple one — a five-word final. Strictly speaking, there are fewer words, which seem to be simple, but it is not easy to write, and the root cause is that there are too few words。
A lot of people write long articles and talk, but once he writes five words, 20 words in the district, he doesn't come, for the simple reason — it needs power。
There are four words, five words each, and 20 words in total, whether it's a view or a gesture of affection, or it feels like nothing or enough。
Today we'll let the newest friends who like poetry write it, and write it like that, not bending, step by step with me。
What's five
Before writing, you have to understand。
In five words, one of china's traditional poems, abbreviated by five words, refers to a poem that is four words of five words of four and is in the realm of nearness。
1. Fixed length. There are only four sentences, five words each, for a total of twenty words。
2. Rhyming is strict. The final words must rhyme, and they must be even。
3. Peace. The four basic phrases of the phrase “ping-ping-ping” and “ping-ping-ping” are:。
It originates from the han dynasty poetry and is deeply influenced by the song of the six-dynasty people, and is stereotypedly older than tang dynasty, and is the first body to appear and to be stereotyped in the final words。
The works of li bai, "sitting alone to mount trinity", dufu's "eight-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six-six, wang wai's "bill-singing-six" and liu chang-sing's "the man of the spirit."。
Three of them are the best
One, li baek
The moonlight in front of the bed is suspected to be frost。
Look forward to the moon tomorrow and think back home。
In the fifth place, li baek's nightingale is in the first place, and it's no exaggeration to say that every chinese will carry it. It's almost the first poem that parents teach their children。
Maybe people are too familiar with it. If you ask what's good about it. I can't answer that for a second. From a creative point of view, the whole poem understood that there was no such thing as an isolated word, or a scripture, or a long line, but that was not its best place。
The most moving part of it is the common human emotion — the love of home. The poem, which the country's most soft heart has touched, cannot be stopped. For centuries, the moon has been looking at the windows, the shadows and the land beneath its feet, a poem that has also made the moon an omen of thought。
The king's landing peak building
The sun is full, and the yellow river flows into the sea。
I'm going to need a thousand miles。
The five words of the king's quiet nightingale, which, in the way of writing, is written, are simple and far-reaching in terms of words, rhymes, as the yellow river is a thousand miles away, and is vast。
The final sentence, “to be poor, to go higher”, has a profound philosophy of life, not only in view of the landscape, but also in order to live well. The short, short numbers come from the great tang weather, the dynamic life, the strong sense of life, the undeterred hope and creativity, the spirit that inspires and the mood is open。
3 and willow zongwon
A thousand birds are flying away, and the people are missing。
It's all alone。
It was said that it was the loneliest poem in a thousand years and that it was easy to understand the loneliness in the context of willow zongyuan. The poem was written during the time of yan yuen's residence in liuzhou, and the body was exiled, controlled, detained and severely depressed。
The poets used the technique of “drinking”, in the context of the snowy river, in which there was no bird in the heavens and the earth, and there was no footprint, but a canoe and a fisherman in a canoe, which was silent and clean, and which bore the pride of the poets, who, after a thousand years, still struck deep into their souls。
In my opinion, the word “single” is the eye of the whole poem, and the old fisherman is not a fish, but the heart of the snow, the wind and the air。
Write it now, write it five times。
Now you know what the top three of the top five are, and you know what the mood is
Ideas
You can write anything you want. You can write, you can write, you can write, you can write, you can write, you can write, you can write, you can write, you can write, you can write
Remember one thing: you can write anything, you can write anything, you can write if you're not the one who touches on moral law。
If you really can't figure it out, then follow my lead, assuming i'm out of town, and i happen to be snowing, and i want to warm myself up, and i'm going to go into a tavern and have a drink, and i'm going to write this story and the feelings in my heart, and i'm going to have it right now。
Ii. Green
As stated earlier, there are four forms of choice。
(i) no rhyme in the opening sentence:
It's flat and flat。
"ping" and "ping" are flat。
(ii) the beginning of the sentence in rhyme:
♪ ♪ ping, ping, ping, ping。
"ping" and "ping" are flat。
(iii) the first sentence is not rhymed:
"ping" and "ping" are flat。
It's flat and flat。
(iv) parallel beginnings in rhyme:
Ping, ping, ping, ping。
It's flat and flat。
(note: double quotes indicate flatness and cross marks indicate hyphenation)
3. Action
Four styles, you choose one, for example, the second and the beginning of the sentence。
You remember or imagine, you're in the field, you're almost new year's, you're drinking in a small squirm in the snow。
First sentence, go to the tavern in the snow. A little drunk. What's the first rule? Ah, ping-ping, then find the corresponding plain words, which just happens to show the scene, “down in a drunk building”, first sentence, second sentence。
I've been drinking for years, i've been out fighting, i've lost my wallet, i'm getting older, and the second sentence is flat and flat。
It's been a while since i've been missing my home, and it's almost new year's, and i don't know if i can take back the high iron ticket, so i look at the snow outside, and i feel sad, and i say two words, and the third sentence is flat and the fourth sentence is flat, so i say, "he's snowed and white."
This is the end of a five-word line, and it's very simple for you to find it in a hundred minutes if you find it difficult。
4. Testing
After a poem, you're afraid there's something wrong. It's a great thing to do, and it's easy to measure poetry and words by downloading "i love poetry" from the store。
What if there's a script? Simple, replace it with a synonym, and some dissatisfied places can be modified, which is called “advance”. Usually good poems are not written, but modified。
A practical technique to write five final words
Look at this poem。
Zhao djoa, "the snow in the guests"
Wine-drunk buildings, few autumns。
He snowed on the earth, whiteened his head。
One, by writing novels. Poetry
The process of writing novels is beginning, developing, climaxing, ending, and novels are attractive because of storylines. It is easier to write poems, starting, carrying, turning and collating, but, while it is only four short sentences and 20 words in their entirety, it is possible to write a full story by refining it。
For example, in the first edition of "the snow of the guests" , it starts: being away from home, drinking in the snow and drinking intoxicated; being: feeling lost in the years, and doing nothing; turning around: looking at the snow that falls on the branches, remembering where it came from; rejoicing that people were away from their homes, drifting away, falling from the snow, thinking about white hair on their heads and deepening the subject。
Image
It is important to have a sense of image in the final five words, and to give space for thought。
The end phrase, “his country snowed and white heads were white”, i first wrote, “his country snowed and white heads were white heads”, and while there was a sense of image and truth, the impression of “houses” was cold and not angry。
And the branches are different, and the trees are life, and it's winter, but you can think of spring as a spring when it draws long leaves and greens。
Trees like men are alive. The snow on the branches of the trees is very much like the white hair of a man growing old, and the emotional oil is born, giving an infinite imagination。
3. Comparison
If you want to make the five words you wrote vividly and subjectively, write them in contrast, for example, with "sweet in the guests."。
This poem compares home and expatriates, microcosms with snow from home and from abroad, comparisons with wine from home and from abroad, comparisons with people from home and from abroad, comparisons with moods from home and from abroad, and is highly contagious and receives unexpected artistic effects。
Concluding remarks:
Isn't it a surprise to see so many poems and finally write a five-story book today? If you encounter one or another of these problems and distresses in the creative process, you must not be discouraged, learn well and sink yourself. You must know that you have encountered all the difficulties you have encountered on jia island, dov, and li bai。
As long as you really like poetry, you'll be able to write a good poem after a long practice. And there is no shortcut, or the saying of ouyang, "no other way, read it and work it."。
